Startle Incident
Wherever
we go is not important
Hear
startle incident spontaneously
Mind
examine everywhere carefully
The
thunderstorm is coming to my own
Disturbance
would like to show up his face
See a
vehicle which I ever seen
And in
every section it has broken
Making
the heart to be more fluctuates
Eyes
is looking for the rider frighten
How is
the condition of the rider
The
heart is always attack and askin'
My
brother is handled by the doctor
His
damage knee is very bloodcurdlin'
World
is so lonely when see my brother
Nice to read and to get you in better progress on your works. Again, I suggest, for your betterment, you need to get the closer rhyme,,since, sonnet has its special structure...hamasa
BalasHapusYupp, that's my error sir, I'll try to make it in the better one, thanks for your suggestion sir 😄😉😊
BalasHapus